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- "'a cream coloured coffin'....holy---**tears up** ---so holy. .. i dun know whether to pray or scream my cries; this affects me in such a terrible raw vicious way; your words ahve been clouded as of late. blessings. and keep your words and heart open. beauty."
Posted by Unknown on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "I like the stuttering (heaven?) early on... and, yes, the stolen lilies.... the easter flower... and the abandoned spirit... mmmm your skin... must be like your thoughts..... a grave worth dying for, doubtless..... such a powerful metaphor there."
Posted by Unknown on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "Okay every so often there is one that stirs things that you thought you had under control. This made me cry. It was beautiful."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "Fantastic! I love the fact you are there saying the things you need to, although you remain conflicted about it... a brilliant piece of writing....
"with a handful of stolen lines, talking to ghosts who have nothing to say"... thanks, this line will stay with me for a long while... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "palms up....in admiration. I loved the development, It reminded me of "a noiseless patient spider" I think it's called by Whitman, which enlivened and enriched the read. Funny, we posted such similar writes so closely. Very artful, patiently developed with care, precision and craft. *bows before enchanting craftswoman*"
Posted by Unknown on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "this whole write speaks so loudly at me, and all I can say it that it was powerful and thank you for sharing this. I can relate to this on so many levels, especially given the last several days..."
Posted by Ravenblade on "If wishes were trees..." by Narcissa
- "your words make the world seem so cold, so still and stone. watching it die, knowing it must, finding in every life the absence that awaits it... and wishing upon heavy air for another way to be..... I saw the leaf.... to be like the voice, unyielding, a refusal to allow this to happen. again. and the mourners... they too shall have their witnesses.... their untimely adornments..... and a leaf that will not leave.... *silent contemplation* thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "If wishes were trees..." by Narcissa
- "This was quietly crushing. "There were lilies on your grave today
And a few nameless roses too.... The ones that die quickly
Too quickly.
I'll watch them die too..." Gah. I think this is something many can relate to and your words came out wonderfully. Sadly written but written well."
Posted by Dilated View on "If wishes were trees..." by Narcissa
- "there are people [and there are moments] in our lives that are unfathomably imperative and for reasons we never can seem to swallow wholly. i, too, have a moment upon a spiraling leaf that means the world to me. a literal leaf, frozen against a church, cauhgt in amber, caught in a willful wind....and i was torn in two over it. i am only just now beginning to understand the miracle of it. your write reminded me of both halves of my heart. beauty and pain. sewn inextricably."
Posted by Unknown on "If wishes were trees..." by Narcissa
- "stupid? shut the hells up lady! your writes keep alot of us coming back to dp I suspect. I enjoyed this thouroughly, so.. hmpf! dig it. ~b"
Posted by blue on "The dragon.flies" by Narcissa
- "wow... way to hit home, just moved from the lbc to utah... i miss the assholes, pricks and dissidents. the warm sun, waves and miscriants. I was chaotic, it was hell, love loss and indignation. But it was home, it was life, and out here in the cold... i know it will be again."
Posted by Grim_Sorrow on "Like ghosts standing by" by Narcissa
- "that last line resonates so.... just fun to pause among the journey here. to be lookin in... lookin back... trapped in the eyes of those who look out and cannot see. cannot see you at all. and therein lies the beauty of the intellect, there in your words..."
Posted by Unknown on "Like ghosts standing by" by Narcissa
- "*shivers* the depth of the ice this left me with is beyond my frozen reach. Death doesn't sound as inviting.... and I have to wonder if hell froze... and if I am just another ghost standing by. This is well woven, softly spoken with deference paid, with room for the realization to take root and grow... like an aortic stalactite of ice. *bows before poetess*"
Posted by Unknown on "Like ghosts standing by" by Narcissa
- "This accounted for all the senses. A vivid picture of those things that always remain just out of reach. I appreciated the way you painted this picture, very nicely done."
Posted by Dilated View on "I am..." by Narcissa
- "God damn, you kick some ass. Nay, not just some ass. Just ass. You kick it. I wouldn't even know where to begin. Probably at the end, of which, I can only say, I feel sorry for "he"."
Posted by Aleas on "I am..." by Narcissa
- "Something else with rhymes that means something more than candy inside my mind. "
Posted by eske on "Lady Rage" by Narcissa
- "this was devastatingly exquisite.. it smelled and tasted so real...."
Posted by Unknown on "I am..." by Narcissa
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