Comments by All Members
- "I believe I was inspired by your last post...since it was the last thing I read last night and this was spinning in my head this morning...so thank you...I think. I suppose it could have ended different...but I just write what's inside...like the rest of us."
Posted by Narcissa on "I am..." by Narcissa
- "Your poems make pain so palpable...almost as if you have brought to life these leeching parasites of despair with their own hearts and brains and long fingers that lurk in the corner of otherwise perfect paintings. You rouse such buried depths..."
Posted by Unknown on "I am..." by Narcissa
- "you couldve just killed me instead of writing those last two lines. truly."
Posted by Unknown on "I am..." by Narcissa
- "I sometimes cannot believe how a few letters, in a certain order, can be so beautiful. so very beautiful. you profound me. ~moony"
Posted by Unknown on "I am..." by Narcissa
- "i think, maybe...maybe, through love's eyes, blemishes become smoothed away. its not that we don't recognize those faults and flaws, but that those are the little imperfections we cherish most. your words are soft and smoothing......"
Posted by Unknown on "Imprint" by Narcissa
- "this piece is trembling with life, this wilderness of your mind.. makes me think that beauty is too an exquisite blemish.."
Posted by Unknown on "Imprint" by Narcissa
- "i cannot even fathom where such things as this come fom. take me there one day please? so that I may know what real beauty is. because this, this is beautiful kelloggs *hugs*~moony"
Posted by Unknown on "Imprint" by Narcissa
- "I would be concerned if there were someone in which you found no blemishes. Because that's what makes us all authentic as we are all blemished in our own ways. I really liked the two opposing sides in this and the flow kept me interested throughout. Very interesting read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Imprint" by Narcissa
- "And blemished is the only way the rest of can believe we have a fighting chance against the heart collector, which evidently only comes out in the rain because he/she knows thats when we are our most vulnerable, when our thoughts melt by acid rain, and the ashes never seem to melt away, they stick to our skin to remind us of our past, of the mistakes, and the scent of lavender is not for today, but the aroma of a brighter tommorow, if only that tomorrow came, greta read my dear -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Imprint" by Narcissa
- "thank u its great. it made me wanna dance in the rain. too bad its winter now T_T..."
Posted by Scorn Me on "Imprint" by Narcissa
- "I was able to picture every line and for that, I thank you; It was beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Imprint" by Narcissa
- "A stimulating write that comes right to the point and doesn't mince words! I like these lines best: Her vile breathe reeks of hate
as she speaks of your ill fate
"look into my eyes and see your dying ember
because it will be the last thing you remember"
So continue spilling lies and deceit
Before you approach satans seat
She will inflict the injustice you've spread
And eat you alive before you are dead
Even in hell the demons fear
When Lady Rage is called to appear "
Posted by Edgewalker on "Lady Rage" by Narcissa
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