Comments by All Members
- "i cant remember exactly where, but i have heard "Choosing how to die is easy,
Choosing how to live is difficult." i forget who said it... i think it was che or castro.... probably castro"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Depth Perception" by Trigger
- "The San Francisco story is true. It happened some years ago. I may not have quoted the note verbatum, but it is very close."
Posted by Trigger on "Depth Perception" by Trigger
- "...........i remember this...i fell asleep with you..haha...you finished it..amazing......i cant even descrive..it just ....youve got it....i cant choose a favorite .line, sorry, but good write"
Posted by GraveFlower on "P.O.E.M." by Trigger
- "I think you finally hit the nail on the head with this one. . or rather beat it senselessly until it finally gave it and died >_< I enjoyed reading this even though it was unstructured which is something i have a VERY hard time reading. . .All in all i think it fits in a general sense heh. . i wouldnt say that is the rule to poetry by any means i can see where almost all of it is heading in meaning . . and just as always its possible to write about it all you want but even with that much writing i dont think the exact meaning was played out. . nice use of vocabulary XP"
Posted by Lawless Fighter on "P.O.E.M." by Trigger
- "Love this. I like the thoughts in addresses and provokes most of all but i think "
Free spirit locked in the confines of flesh and words." this is my favorite line"
Posted by Unknown on "P.O.E.M." by Trigger
- "well isnt that just implied simply; a moth at the end of a string to play with until you crush it. ..pretty and ugly and sneering simultaneously..."
Posted by Unknown on ""Flirt"" by Trigger
- "Very nice flow. I was under the impression it would be jerky like a lot of these styles are, but this went perfectly and filled the emotion with answers. Nice. "
Posted by Err0r on ""Flirt"" by Trigger
- "this is an excellent write. i really like it. you did the repitition correctly this time kudos lol"
Posted by Unknown on ""Only a Dream"" by Trigger
- "I can remember laying on the grass as a child, fearing the sky and welcoming the feeling of being rooted to the earth. This portrays sadness in past hopes. Absolutely splendid."
Posted by Unknown on ""(Play)ground"" by Trigger
- "Yeah sIo did kinda say what I tried to. the content is .. known to us. Then again you could redo the scene for us and make us think a second time"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on ""Carousel Ride"" by Trigger
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