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- ""It's no fun when it's you, now run!" What a great ending. It's interesting to see the perspective of the killer. That point of view is often so ignored. Yet, you make it relatable with the last line, making the reader think "wait, no, it wouldn't be fun..." Nice write. "
Posted by wilted on "For the pig I dig!" by just breath
- "how nice it would be to tuck ourselves away in a hard shell away from the pain. when the flesh is all that's left after emotion runs dry, it's time to leave.....great post Lean :)"
Posted by Unknown on "The Turtle Gurgle" by just breath
- "haha! I've missed you, Lean. this is brutally honest."I hate vengence, I hate war but deep inside I love the gore " beneath our skin, the animals sleep.reality is a hangover"
Posted by Unknown on "I love to hate you cornbag" by just breath
- "ha i fuckin loved this..it was awsome! fuckin A! now i see what u mean..i love the way you put it together to!
luv manda"
Posted by Unknown on "The Devil In Me" by just breath
- "Great insight on society, and how we think nowadays about others."
Posted by Eric on "Grass" by just breath
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