Grass

By just breath

The grass was green, strong and long
but now grey spots have come along
Taking it's pride it's now dead and gone
the lawn beetle here does not belong
I want to kill them, is this wrong?
am I being racist or should I let the grass just die?

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© 2007 just breath
Published on Monday, March 26, 2007.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Eric On Friday, March 30, 2007, Eric (78)By person wrote:

    Great insight on society, and how we think nowadays about others.

  • A former member wrote: don't discriminate...kill them both!

  • A former member wrote: all its so short, simple and bitter sweet. ][ ][

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, March 26, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Thought this was a poem bout the good kind of grass :) still this was pure and simple.. pure at best

  • A former member wrote: let the grass die..it doesnt want or need you....i like the style u used with this it's cool!~manda~

  • Aunty Depressant On Monday, March 26, 2007, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    Fuckin beetles...they can't help it if the mad scientists and corporate mongers are destroying the climate...let's kill them... Muahaha!

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