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I laughed when you fell
By just breath
I just wanted to shout, but you punched me out
I have contempt for you
Sitting on my window sill, I wonder what the world would be like without
all the misery from you?
I hate your guts, I would love to punch you in the nuts
How do you do:)
I just want to kill you
You are shit that needs flushing
Don't disagree, it's true
So how do you do:)
As My knife slices through you
I laughed when you fell
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© 2007 just breath
Comments on "I laughed when you fell"
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On Friday, March 30, 2007, Eric
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wrote:
Wow.. I can understand this totally. Ive felt this same way before. Another great write!!
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On Monday, March 26, 2007, Enigma
(91) wrote:
Amazing, and funny to with tha (punch you in the nuts) part.
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On Saturday, March 17, 2007, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
damn, sweet, i like it-----u r just pouring out wit fuckin awesome work! good write! ~*dani*~
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A former member wrote:
I laughed too.Especially at "You are shit that needs flushing"...I like angry poems.They make me so warm and gushy inside.
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