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Slip, sliding sad
By just breath
Laughter slip slides away
No pleasure in pain
or even a good day
I smile less and less
I always feel depressed
I must feel pleasure in feeling this way
or I am more than dumb?
Sometimes I feel so alone, I cry for my mum
I long to be home or a kid again
None of this is even sain!
I am not the person I thought I would be
Washed out and tired at 23
In the mirror I look and see
more wrinkles and less of me.
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© 2007 just breath
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Eric
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wrote:
I can relate to this.. Really hits home.. Wonderful write!!
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On Monday, March 26, 2007, Enigma
(91) wrote:
That was great, I could feel the sadness. good work.
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A former member wrote:
we all have to kiss our childhood goodbye too early.Life is never easy,even when you'rea masochist
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A former member wrote:
ha i'll trade with you..u can be 16 and have my life.i'll be 23..sound good to you? jk this was a great write and very well felt..~manda~
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A former member wrote:
I know what you mean. It's all to real. keep it up.
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