Comments by All Members
- "A siren-song to the sleeping, ignorant people in the world who would rather turn their heads than help others and face their own mortality. A nice write by you, Li, certainly compassionate."
Posted by Guillotine on "Fucked up Fantasy" by thesuccubusreturns
- "The last paragraph doesn't fit. The whole poem was going along with a generally gory theme, then at the end it turns into a heartbreak poem.. How about just writing a continuation of this about the heartbreak? great write though. -XHCX"
Posted by Unknown on "Mutilation" by thesuccubusreturns
- "God, this rips my heart out. I don't have words to express what I want to say other than that, I love you and I need you to stay safe. I trust in you,"
Posted by Guillotine on "catch 22" by thesuccubusreturns
- ""For if that which i feared are angels/Who end my pain and woe/That which i love must be the devil" Never knowing what you're feeling, apart from being certain that it's one who's evil and untrustable. Excellent imagery. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Angels and Devils" by thesuccubusreturns
- "A lot of poignant and emotional responses well from this work, I can relate well to this. A sinister walk in the last few stanza's; post more and keep me reading."
Posted by Guillotine on "Angels and Devils" by thesuccubusreturns
- "This was painful to read - this form of abuse leaves the deepest scars and the little part of Stockholm in all of us reacts. Amazing and I can't wait to read more."
Posted by Guillotine on "Tender Abuse" by thesuccubusreturns
