Mutilation
By thesuccubusreturns
I long to sink my teeth into your tanned skin
I want to feel my nails trace the lines of your back
I want welts to form on that untainted skin
I want pain racked through your body
Over and over till you scream for mercy
I want your pain, I want pain in return
I long to be maimed and mutilated by you
I want that blade to run down my milky flesh
I want to bleed my passion at your hands
Rip me apart and I will love you more
At your hands I want to be destroyed
Loose myself to the pain, the torment
With every bite, every cut our love grew
We got stronger the more we hurt one another
Bite me love let me drown in delicious pain once more
Let the knife cut, the fire burn
And the ice freeze
Let me maim you, molest you
Let that crimson blood trickle down my throat
And let me have it all in return
But you’re lost to me, my scars are healing
The memory of that wicked pain all I have
Remembering those long nights
When we loved each other more than we thought possible
And we tore each other apart.
Comments on "Mutilation"
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A former member wrote:
I'm speechless. Awesome write
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A former member wrote:
The last paragraph doesn't fit. The whole poem was going along with a generally gory theme, then at the end it turns into a heartbreak poem.. How about just writing a continuation of this about the heartbreak? great write though. -XHCX