Comments by All Members
- "Great apprehension... I have an AngelDemon of my own in the past.. They can be treacherous.... Light on the breeze as your words carry anvils to my heart.
Cascading silhouettes of photographs and memories,
And heart-sparked infidelities ... Those lines spoke to me.. Also loved your imagery with the rain and clock.. Tic-tok.. nicely done
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Posted by whisperingwalls on "Situational Apprehension" by Imsosickxxx
- "Thank you. Honestly, I smiled as I wrote that line, nothing makes me feel as good as writing a line that fits so perfectly. Even more so when it turns out to be a double entendre =)"
Posted by Imsosickxxx on "Situational Apprehension" by Imsosickxxx
- "The way in which you compared a heartbeat with the gentle sound of rain on a window was potent imagery. I also liked the play on words in "But you're an investment my dear, mature, grow up." A wonderful write to be sure. "
Posted by MikeShank1989 on "Situational Apprehension" by Imsosickxxx
- "a gentle melancholy start that builds with a strong ending... a lot to take in and reflect... connect to, consider and move on from... welcome back and enjoyed this a lot... well done"
Posted by NikesRain on "Situational Apprehension" by Imsosickxxx
- "I Had A Mental Movie while reading this. Amazing Imagery Uses. I Love using Imagery. Good Piece Mane."
Posted by Unknown on "Mercy Killing" by Imsosickxxx
- "at some instances i feel this way , moreso than i should i think , when i look in the mirror i see a person capable of having normal views and feelings and relationships but in the real life there is actually nothing... i feel you ,thanks :)"
Posted by Unknown on "I am a Monster" by Imsosickxxx
- "And if you are a monster...then you mimic a human and become flesh and blood; as are we all.
I really enjoyed this."
Posted by Amaryllis on "I am a Monster" by Imsosickxxx
- "I agree, it's just hard sometimes when you find yourself being something you swore you never would...change is easier said than done but is worth the change if you can. Thank you."
Posted by Imsosickxxx on "I am a Monster" by Imsosickxxx
- "Man I really feel you on this, I find myself here a bit. But there's 2 sides to every coin and no matter what you've done your darker nature doesn't devoid your good thoughts. You can only be who you are today. so if you dislike yourself then change and know your and know you deserve to be forgiven."
Posted by Ashteroth on "I am a Monster" by Imsosickxxx
- "I think if I was to be faced with every bad, immoral, or unrighteous thing I have done, that I would not be able look at myself or accept myseof for who I was anymore. Soemtimes, though, it's good to take off the mask and reflect on things. Accepting them a little at a time is easier to stomach I think..."
Posted by Imsosickxxx on "I am a Monster" by Imsosickxxx
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