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- "such excellence within the wordplay, accompanied by an un-forced occasioning rhyme scheme, really well put together,.. a sad write.written well."
Posted by Unknown on "and fire became dust" by denver nitze
- "singing off the screen... I like the line, "it's deep in the empty" myself... kinda reifies (note to dp god: this should be added to the dictionary with "dialogue") all that is not, as if there were some place where dead love goes when it dies... ♥"
Posted by Unknown on "and fire became dust" by denver nitze
- "At the risk of sounding 'hallmark'ish...i think we have to find some sort of contentment and piece with whatever situation we're dealing with, and basically put it to bed...the rest is one day at a time. Also not just thinking, ..but believeing you will be ok,..here,...or there:)"
Posted by Unknown on "carrion daydream (sick joke)" by denver nitze
- "luckily for the world... beauty has been deepened, brightened, increased and given life, the word itself has found new bounds, all because of these 29 years... and this world will be so much less *lights a candle* you share this day (tenth?) with my nephew... and now I know happysad... thanks for being you *sends all the strength of love*"
Posted by Unknown on "twenty.nine candles" by denver nitze
- "I'm really liking this one, tells me you don't care about what happens, and not to think about it, let life come to you and play along."
Posted by D3ADT0WN on "drive" by denver nitze
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