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"ah. wow. this made me tingle. you have such a way with words. I'm blown away right now."
Posted by Six-Out on "fuck-me-red film noir dreams." by verablue

" Nothing hurts like hollywood, and nothing feels the same.. "
Posted by Disassembly Boy on "fuck-me-red film noir dreams." by verablue

"..isolated motion..... delicately conveyed.. in subtle hints of tangible intimacy...."
Posted by elisa on "fuck-me-red film noir dreams." by verablue

"loved the rhyme scheme in this, the structure, the dirty gritty feel to your words. This poemly so closely mirrored some of my own, yet far exceeded them with such elequent force."
Posted by Guillotine on "fuck-me-red film noir dreams." by verablue

"It think some of the analogies are before my time, but I repeat and flow to this piece, thus bravo all the same. ~T"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "fuck-me-red film noir dreams." by verablue

"this was frantic. like flashbacks in red of ulta sex and passionate violence. loved the rhythm of this. like industrial set to old foreign films. "
Posted by Anth on "fuck-me-red film noir dreams." by verablue

"holy shit. the title is intense in itself. and the rest...that ending. you are mind-blowing. "
Posted by dying angel on "fuck-me-red film noir dreams." by verablue

"amazing...lovin' your style "
Posted by Unknown on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue

""And at 6:30am the rain comes crashing down like solitude Seeping through the doors in sweet symphonies"....*exhales* no one does it like you."
Posted by dying angel on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

""And I wear this costume like a trophy," "I've dreamt this life before," some great lines in here... I look forward to reading more. Keep it up."
Posted by stormtalk on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue

"Gaaah this brings back bad memories!!!! __You played the fiddle to my pasT__I love it........-_OttO_-"
Posted by Unknown on "i hate you when you play the angel" by verablue

"its not really meant to fit together....its just discarded fragments of peices i cant seem to finish. perhaps someday parts of it will move on to bigger and better things...but i doubt it."
Posted by verablue on "de//fragment this mess" by verablue

""Black hail" - great visualization. I liked parts of this one, but as a whole, something about it seemed slapdash."
Posted by stormtalk on "de//fragment this mess" by verablue

"Stunning write, overall. I think "Measuring time in cigarettes" will stick with me, and you used the word "prevarication," so I'm sold."
Posted by stormtalk on "more." by verablue

"Why lose yourself?"
Posted by stormtalk on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

":) :) :) This was like a series of polaroids, each so telling and brilliant with only the minimum of detail needed to convey emotion. Fan-bloomin- tastic!!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

"Seconded!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

"God i love finding old writes in random places!!! Especially ones from a long time ago...Trips ya out a bit huh...I loved this.... _-JosH-_"
Posted by Unknown on "silicone silence" by verablue

"well i´m kinda new in these things... i think its really good and thanks for the other comment... after reading it again i realized the las lines were un necessary... thanks again... Good luck AZ"
Posted by Unknown on "this is no ordinary virus" by verablue

"i dont know why you have the power to rip memories from the electric neurons in my brain. so many nights... coke and new castle used to be the choise of champions. people should comment on writes like this, writes with personality and depth, kudos kiddo"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

"I felt that in my veins doll...Amazing!!! "
Posted by Unknown on "beautiful atrocity" by verablue

"This is a wonderful piece of work.. so intelligent and descriptive. "The air is sticky with loose tongue confessions".. I will be coming back to read this often. Artistically executed. I'm enthralled by this. "
Posted by Lynaes on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

"i agree with saint. another well received poem of yours. i liked this greatly. good one ~Tamara"
Posted by Unknown on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

"This is so insanely and somberly beautiful. A favorite, very much."
Posted by James_the_Saint on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

"I was thinking about you, and hoping you'd be posting soon. Thank God you did, this was neat, I like it"
Posted by Unknown on "24 hr.(...church walls and dive bar bathroom stalls...)" by verablue

"*I’m walking on eggshells With grace like tidal waves and hurricanes*....*Four girls fates glowing under merlot flames*....fucking stunners for sure. a-fucking-mazing."
Posted by Bella Butchery on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue

"One of my favourites from you, Baz. A lot of brilliant constructions and skilled manipulation, threaded through with imagination and passion."
Posted by Guillotine on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue

""tangled blue hair and canvas skin"...."Every night it’s the same dream"...so melancholic. tons of great lines...and the imagery is fantastic. i'm in love with this piece."
Posted by dying angel on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue

"Moving, Fantastic"
Posted by just breath on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue

"Really enjoyed it great write "
Posted by Unknown on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue

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