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"it's that horrible catch-22.. your instincts say you want them, but your head says you shouldn't. you so desperately want to be close enough to be the reason their heart beats.. incredibly painful."
Posted by Lynaes on "it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover." by i tremble

"oh good god... ow.."
Posted by Lynaes on "it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover." by i tremble

"Love the title. It sums up this poetry perfectly. -Cor"
Posted by PaperPromises on "it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover." by i tremble

"Wow I can feel this. You said so much in so few word. Love it"
Posted by openureyes on "it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover." by i tremble

"god. you're too amazing."
Posted by dying angel on "it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover." by i tremble

"I love the way you portrayed this... Very nice. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover." by i tremble

"it is indeed. and I'm sure many have felt this. wonderful delivery."
Posted by Six-Out on "it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover." by i tremble

"I thought that is was wonderful,and so sad(signf)"
Posted by Unknown on "queen of winter." by i tremble

"Each line was a lure. Most excellent."
Posted by Recycled on "queen of winter." by i tremble

"beautiful passionate soulful.....i love this!"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "because they couldn't sleep." by i tremble

"incredible...i had forgot all about the tiny dancers in the music boxes of yesterday...so long ago and you captured the feeling they let perfectly. "
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "the girl in the musicbox." by i tremble

"damn, this is kinda heart wrenching =/"
Posted by mozarts cat on "after everything." by i tremble

"Reading this took me back into my past. Must break the cycle. great write."
Posted by Unknown on "your words." by i tremble

"kick em to the curb"
Posted by Mari on "your words." by i tremble

"The Devil in disguize!!! That is so good!!! I like it!!"
Posted by Unknown on "your words." by i tremble

"Your mind is a maze. This was fantastically good."
Posted by Six-Out on "skeleton whore." by i tremble

"....seem to enjoy it. "
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "skeleton whore." by i tremble

"A side few will "openly" admit to, but I suspect is on a larger scale than most may presume. Oh, the crank ho's that used to be my and my bro's companions, now destroyed. True to life write. Sad to see loved ones goes down that path, even when they seem t"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "skeleton whore." by i tremble

""it will destroy me, quite possibly even before she does so herself." such a morbid piece. loved!"
Posted by dying angel on "skeleton whore." by i tremble

"this is grotesquely gorgeous .. superb!!"
Posted by mozarts cat on "skeleton whore." by i tremble

"This gives me the idea of being in love/ lusting for a junkie. Nice write either way."
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "skeleton whore." by i tremble

"damn. the side effects are so much worse. i agree. god you're amazing."
Posted by dying angel on "side effects of losing you." by i tremble

"This was impressive. That last stanza was a killer. I get short of breath reading your stuff sometimes. Keep 'em comin'."
Posted by Six-Out on "side effects of losing you." by i tremble

""Sugar water tears will f a l l should you ever leave me alone." Very beautiful. This started gently, and then became a torrent right before the end, like the rain on Clearwater beach. Write on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "side effects of losing you." by i tremble

"i completely adored this. especially the last stanza. insomnia does a lot to people. "
Posted by dying angel on "because they couldn't sleep." by i tremble

"restless mind....pounding heart.... roaming hands....Mmm.... this feels good."
Posted by elisa on "because they couldn't sleep." by i tremble

"WOW!!!!!!!! last stanza: knock out. Love - 'black mascara butterflies'...darkly enchanting...2nd bookmark of the day...yeps..love this."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "because they couldn't sleep." by i tremble

"fucking brilliant. I love te structure, it reminds me of a tiny dancer, tightly wound."
Posted by hate_doll on "the girl in the musicbox." by i tremble

"this was wonderful! Made me smile and shiver at all the times sleep was just not an option."
Posted by hate_doll on "because they couldn't sleep." by i tremble

"very poetic and sublime. Your imagery (especially your color imagery) is great. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "because they couldn't sleep." by i tremble

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