Comments by All Members
- "But really, to own such a thing of beauty would be to tie down her wings and leave her longing to break free. To hold something...is to grant the freedom to move...even if that sometimes brings farewells and bitter endings. Nicely done. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Angels Dust" by Asouldivided
- ""Alive and still breathing/And that's the worst" So many emotions laid out here, so open and ripping and raw...you tore gashes in my chest with your words, leaving me breathless. Excellent. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Buried alive" by Asouldivided
- "Superb effort, fantastic imagery, language and variation in structure without losing the flow of the poem. Especially love the way the poem comes full circle."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Buried alive" by Asouldivided
- "Be careful what is brought forth to those with literal/visual minds...Borders?..with boarders I start seeing cold bathrooms with tenants being acidified down the drain...I like the sun bit."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Evening Dawn" by Asouldivided
- "This was really cool, man. Definately something much more tangible, not what i'm used to seeing. A lot of the same subject matter just keeps getting beaten to death around here but, you broke the monotony. Excellent work."
Posted by Unknown on "May I dance with you" by Asouldivided
- ""See the devil dance with gods" really stunning imagery here. quite powerful and it all leads to a great ending. this is my favorite of yours so far. "
Posted by dying angel on "Afternoon" by Asouldivided
- "wow this was an amzing read! I thourghly enjoyed this, such amazing imagery! Great work. ~\borrowed~dream/~"
Posted by Unknown on "Afternoon" by Asouldivided
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