Log In
Her love for black lights
By Asouldivided
Slowly dancing in the dark
She pul-sates like a spider infront of
a red rose - disaster
Crawling her way back up
The sky
Where just one single star
Waits for his species to forget
The moon just looks while he
Tries to grab onto the ledge of
The night surrounded by
His sky
Where just one single thought
Waits for his species to forget
I just wait, wait for the eternal
Decision made by just one thing
Guess again yes it’s him
The fucked up sky
Fallen back again she starts
To climb, climb till time is
Dancing - together with her
embraced night
Tunnel waiting
Bliss~y light frames
I touched the Sky
But she?
I wish…
I give …
Would give…
…
Her
…
Mine
…
One day
…
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2006 Asouldivided
Published on Saturday, October 21, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Her love for black lights"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Tuesday, January 9, 2007, Step_20
(25)
wrote:
very interesting ideas...you should have gotten more comments on it. Obscure! I absolutely love the way you ended it!!
-
A former member wrote:
damn. i loved it asoul. nicely done. keep writing :)
-
A former member wrote:
Ooo Black Lights for good with Extacy also:-) ;-) ][Nstant ][Nsanity
-
A former member wrote:
mmmmmm like eating a piece of warm apple pie. I liked the images and heart in this piece!
-
A former member wrote:
*delete this comment after fixing* 3rd stanza, second line..... "grap"?
-
On Saturday, October 21, 2006, Asouldivided
(22) wrote:
yes a typewrite, thank you but how can I delete your comment?
Asouldivided's Latest Works Feed
Join