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May I dance with you
By Asouldivided
Tell me why I still play with the fire
After all these scars and burns
Cause I can’t learn as fast as they do
Tell me why this ape is laughthing down his tree
After all these years of progress
Cause we are crawling in the mud
Tell me why this tree is bleeding
After it lived and learned so long
Cause we are afraid of knowing
Tell me why we should be proud
After all these straight lines of man
Beating the weak hearts
Outcastin the others
They are their only love and fall
Cause there are people just like you
Dancing in the trees with sticks
Dancing till the world collapses
With just a smile for destiny
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© 2006 Asouldevided
Published on Saturday, August 26, 2006.
Filed under:
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Comments on "May I dance with you"
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On Tuesday, January 2, 2007, Mylissa
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wrote:
Simply stunning.
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A former member wrote:
This was really cool, man. Definately something much more tangible, not what i'm used to seeing. A lot of the same subject matter just keeps getting beaten to death around here but, you broke the monotony. Excellent work.
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A former member wrote:
Hah. I'm the wind mon. I've been Viking screaming FOREVER.
Just kidding. More like all of our souls put together are the wind.
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On Sunday, August 27, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical
(78) wrote:
~i have lots of thoughts about this piece...somehow it made a big picture that had a good or a bad (depending on who you are) message...cool write
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A former member wrote:
This is very good and beautiful.
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