Evening Dawn

By Asouldivided

The same street with shadows hanging deep

The sun smiles but all I see
is a red deluded expresion on her face
while she slowly walks off the horizon

melted all boarders
between reality and my dreams
melted like ice in vulture-light

The relic light turns softly into the shadows
We use to call our souls

The sun burns mat red
She waits for the darkness
To pale her eternaly

Where did I go?
Where did I come from?

Where are you?

The first time I realize I walked alone
The whole way from the start

The last red spoud touches my face
Greedy sucking my life before it
Fades slowely out of my reach
Out of my soul

You were just an imaginary self
reflecting image of my daily hunger

This was the first time in my life
I looked into those eyes
Staring out of the darkness
I start to laugh painfully
How could I’ve been so blind?

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© 2006 Asouldivided
Published on Thursday, October 19, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Aunty Depressant On Thursday, October 19, 2006, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    Be careful what is brought forth to those with literal/visual minds...Borders?..with boarders I start seeing cold bathrooms with tenants being acidified down the drain...I like the sun bit.

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