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- "makes me think of Heraclitus that the eternal form behind art, behind us, is fire... a conflagration obscured by smoke, hidden by the ashes of our charred remains... awesome "
Posted by Unknown on "Matchstick poetry" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "I miss Rizal! hehe.. amazing tetch.. i love the way you used simplicity. your words here, are like magnifying glass.. hmm.. im not making any sense.. as always.. but i loved this."
Posted by Unknown on "Matchstick poetry" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "This was resounding. Certainly worth reading and rereading. I even stopped watching the game for a minute to read this one. haha. Well done, I really enjoyed reading this. --Jes"
Posted by glasshouse on "Lolitas in 1952" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "..."Moaning and groaning and groaning and moaning" pulsations, the rhythms the image is still felt; still there. I love the last two lines: reminds me of Beckett's "Waitig For Godot". Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Lolitas in 1952" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "...rollerSkating Punch&Judy Extreme Sports; heh!). Still, nice. I love the emotion of your final line and the truth of: "I know i was wierd back then having been obsessed with such." Yea, ditto!"
Posted by Unknown on "Mortal Kombat Memories" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "...headbutt, backhand, complex uppercut! That Street Fighter magic, juggling movements and I feel those movements in your joystick poem. Sometimes its just good to recall the fun, even in poetry. Well done (although I was more into Downhill..."
Posted by Unknown on "Mortal Kombat Memories" by Rebel_not_Radical
- ""It was those who stood beside me Laughing when we killed each other off..." pure emotion in the semblance of a video game[1992/5]; CHOOSE YOUR FIGHTER! Shang Tsung. I was there for a a high kick, a low punch, a low kick, a blocked button; heavy elbow,..."
Posted by Unknown on "Mortal Kombat Memories" by Rebel_not_Radical
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