Comments by All Members
- ""That'll patch my emotions, or what other people call my stuffings." Truthful & very beautiful write. Very good job on this one. The imagery was tantalizing."
Posted by K_Love on "The Mannequin Sings" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "An amazing write as I am becoming very fond of your writing- your a very talented young man and you seem to bring life to the hearts of this generation with every beat uttered in every syllable of every word. More power to ya :) ~alone~"
Posted by Unknown on "Ubermensch Voodoo Man" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "You crazy bastard...was this an overman jamboree, the fornicating flirtatious outrageous beast within was unleashed here...so excellent stanzas really lap it up, I feel washed in ashes...punishing words, excellent though"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Ubermensch Voodoo Man" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "all I know is I will always love my brothers...
and for the rest of my time in ,
I'll serve the ones who didn't make it.
HM2 B"
Posted by Unknown on "Soldier" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "tetchy, i won't rest until you've upgraded. this was so amazing..you really captured the feeling here.."A volley of colored bullets fired From cossacks' blunderbuss Fall down wasted on the wounded ground" fabulous images. i love this."
Posted by Unknown on "The Painting I Have Kissed" by Rebel_not_Radical
- ""Never is a poet done immortalizing" Sometimes I'll stand in a museum, stare at a piece, like Picasso or some unknown, and have no clue... yet, there is something. So I keep looking, searching for that inner 'blurghk!', whch could mean anything. Suddenly "
Posted by Unknown on "The Painting I Have Kissed" by Rebel_not_Radical
- ""Drumrolls of the army's boots rattle in your heart" The beat & rhythm of gun-grey bullets bleeds as beautiful as blue music, the pulse of red... Sigma sigma sigma be w/ you! Bravo!"
Posted by Unknown on "Soldier" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "yes the form and coercion of the piece is haunting and drenched in the rain of memory, each personal recollection collides with life threatening sanity and seems to indicate a displaced feel...an excellent and chilling post from a man of young age but wit"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Days of the Flower Elegy" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "incredibly searing and evocative poem exploding fourth with moral force. Like a 21st century Wifred Owen..I have the feeling you are a gutsy writer with no bounds, shall enjoy your posts no doubt..Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Soldier" by Rebel_not_Radical
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