The Painting I Have Kissed
By Rebel_not_Radical
In your blank smile
I paint by meaningless pigments
unto this parched canvas
The quintessence
.....Of love.....
.....Of lust.....
.....Of deception.....
.....Of trust.....
And when my voluptous easel moves
With graceful force of a lava rush
A volley of colored bullets fired
From cossacks' blunderbuss
Fall down wasted on the wounded ground
.........So i..........
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....*blurghk*....
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.....Cough the bloody mary I drank to.....
...Use as my impromptu color red...
...So please shut up...
Dont argue with my drunken reasoning
Never is a poet done immortalizing
Neither will the work be less burdening
And yet in this moment of a Herculean task
.....I broke down.....
....Forgive me....
....I stole a moment from your lips....
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Comments on "The Painting I Have Kissed"
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On Monday, October 19, 2015, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
Love the skill, and the sassy style to this. Brilliant
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On Wednesday, August 23, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Damn. You just stole mine too. Amazing is all I can say hun.
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A former member wrote:
tetchy, i won't rest until you've upgraded. this was so amazing..you really captured the feeling here.."A volley of colored bullets fired From cossacks' blunderbuss Fall down wasted on the wounded ground" fabulous images. i love this.
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On Tuesday, August 22, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical
(75) wrote:
~well i have, i think its not yet finished or some problem messed it up...o well
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A former member wrote:
"Never is a poet done immortalizing" Sometimes I'll stand in a museum, stare at a piece, like Picasso or some unknown, and have no clue... yet, there is something. So I keep looking, searching for that inner 'blurghk!', whch could mean anything. Suddenly
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A former member wrote:
... I'll see the eyes, the paint strokes, the lips, or mistakes which are far more perfect. This is one of those paintings... Well done.