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I Waltz To The Beat of Your Fire
By Rebel_not_Radical
If the world was choreographed
We'd be perfect
We'd be lost in each other's
Arm in an eternal ballet
But sadly, it is not...
And we would fall like figurines
Dirtying the earth
Everytime our clay-dust shatters
But If I was the one who made missteps
Forgive me
I really wouldnt want to stain those
Little pretty glass-slippers
It glows of such moonbeams
That I would be blood-letting
If I saw it greasy...
We would twirl and my hair
matted my eyes like the night-curtain
So it could malicously hide my boyish emotions
I treasured and crushed your curves in my arms
You seem irritated...
(but secretly I liked it and hid my grins)
I foolishly reason-out that it's
Because of your gyroscopic dance steps
That can manuever a thousand fleet of love's battleship
The deadliest weapons, they wield...
Your beautiful soul burning in fire...
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© 2006 Tetch de la Cruz
Published on Friday, August 25, 2006.
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Comments on "I Waltz To The Beat of Your Fire"
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On Thursday, September 21, 2006, Bluegirl
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wrote:
OOh, I found myself reading this over and over. It makes me feel quite dreamy. :> Excellent!
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On Sunday, August 27, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
How ever do you do it? *sits in awe* once more! *Bravo* dear. Julia~
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On Saturday, August 26, 2006, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i adore that first verse and the ideas in this, i could read it over and over
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On Saturday, August 26, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Wondrous piece, overtones of desire and destitute moments, the face that launched a thousand ships, was not a face but a soul...I like that idea far more...wonderful
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A former member wrote:
great write, the whole thing was just wonderful. "So it could malicously hide my boyish emotions" that line was just perfect ~Tamara
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On Friday, August 25, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Dear god this was beautiful...*sighs* Tis was something magcial to breathe in I followed the dance wanting to be there, it felt so heartshattering real. ~Gothic
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