Comments by All Members
- "I twisted my wrist
to let her see
the knife glint
in my eyes.....I loved this poem..especially this verse...you are very talented."
Posted by Unknown on "blade" by Father_Faust
- "Playing poker with the deamons can lead to revealing poetry....i liked this and how candid it is. I admire the raw pain dripping from your words...~MR~"
Posted by Unknown on "I didn't want" by Father_Faust
- "i really liked this..it was so quick yet packed quite a bit of a punch. i especially enjoyed the ending, great write. "
Posted by Unknown on "blade" by Father_Faust
- "This reminded me of a poem that should be in the book the melancholy life of oyster boy. Thank you so much, good write."
Posted by Unknown on "Quite sick" by Father_Faust
- "Not with a good SPF it won't.. ;) hehe! I thought this was adorably dark and funny! Welcome to DP and keep it up! Nice. Julia~ "
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "worse" by Father_Faust
- "Charming....I think this humour will be hit and miss here I'm sorry buddy. They'll be maybe a few who laugh(like me) and appreciate the flippant nature to life, but too many toffee nosed peeps will disregard you...you have been warned!! Good luck..Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "worse" by Father_Faust
- "good humour, exquisite post, typically devilish for a 21st cntury Faustian - he he, I like. Also...welcome to DP, watch you don't an axe in the head Father. I'll pray for you."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "crashed through" by Father_Faust
- "I quite like this one. I take it you can't be arsed with long writes? Fair play...nice one Fausty, did you sell your soul to the devil? He he...shucks man, me too!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "blade" by Father_Faust
- "a slightly skippy tone gives the poem a minimal elevation from the typical. The repitive I'm not the one gives the short piece slight melodic undertones from the shock tactics of the piece. "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "I'm not the one" by Father_Faust
- "this does have a creepy element to it, it isn't a paricular type of poem I like, it's difficult to gauge how much is embellished for the poem and how much is real. I suppose on that basis, not bad ."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "They talk to me" by Father_Faust
- "this is disturbing again.. I don't know what to make of it, I've never felt this way about... kids?"
Posted by Unknown on "with ease" by Father_Faust
