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blade
By Father_Faust
with heart pounding
exitement mounting
I pulled back the blade
I twisted my wrist
to let her see
the knife glint
in my eyes
I'm sure she read
my intent
filled her with dread
she begged to pray
the whispered request
the last thing
to pass her lips
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© 2006 Father_Faust
Published on Wednesday, July 19, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I twisted my wrist
to let her see
the knife glint
in my eyes.....I loved this poem..especially this verse...you are very talented.
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A former member wrote:
i really liked this..it was so quick yet packed quite a bit of a punch. i especially enjoyed the ending, great write.
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653)
wrote:
Or maybe she swiped the blade? *devilish grin* This one rocked! Julia~
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