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"this was really nice it exspresses your emotions profoundly. nice write"
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile

""And I climbed back onto my lonely stake To never again let a beautiful bird in my garden" this was sooo heartbreaking to read. "
Posted by dying angel on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

"so many big words... so much time (to look it up in the dictionary)..lol.. it's good, if i understood the words.. lol"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Funeral at my Place of Mistakes" by Fading_Smile

"Each step you take is a little victory. Walk on. Great write."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Funeral at my Place of Mistakes" by Fading_Smile

"You speak beyond your years with a voice like aged wine viewing the world with such weathered eyes through your descriptions. Do the world a favor and keep sharing. Good show ole man!"
Posted by Unknown on "Funeral at my Place of Mistakes" by Fading_Smile

""I watched my earthen memories take in rain/Overflowing, eloping with my happiness" and But the sun will still rise cutter red" the ending was so sad and so truthful. it made me wanna cry. "
Posted by dying angel on "Funeral at my Place of Mistakes" by Fading_Smile

"Wow! Dark, complacent, true to your heart. I loved the imagery here also, the colors, vivid. Well done hun! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Funeral at my Place of Mistakes" by Fading_Smile

""I always was just another scarecrow" absolutely beautiful poem. you are quite talented."
Posted by Unknown on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

""singed by the heat of goodbye"...excellent write. Left me reeling in the words and straining to hear the tune behind them. Exceptionally well done. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face" by Fading_Smile

"what you are writing.. (i'm a blonde, please excuse me) but this was a very good write... very good write, indeed"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face" by Fading_Smile

"damn... the way you write sometimes bring tears to my eyes.. and this was one of them.. you are able to put out everything on your mind.. and you also have a way of putting a variety of words into one piece.. like, i'll read it and i have to think about w"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face" by Fading_Smile

""But I finally found shelter In different chords, You always were too sharp". reading those lines made me wanna cry. trying so hard to convince yourself that something went wrong...trying to find an excuse..avoiding reality."
Posted by dying angel on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face" by Fading_Smile

"That last line.... awesome! "
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face" by Fading_Smile

"Blake I tell you, you know how to bring the reader in and feel the emotion you put into your works. Fantastic job hun! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face" by Fading_Smile

"what can i say? you know i'm going to say that you are one of the greatest writers i know, and you know that i'm going to complement you until my face is pink and purple.. "
Posted by mywristshurt on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

"this is beautiful can i grow in your secret garden?"
Posted by waterchica999 on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

"Ooppss...*Your* ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

""You sobbing was the call of a different crow"...hot damn, have you pierced my heart through-and-through with this one! And as Julia said, the scarecrow/crow metaphor was brilliant. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

"..btw, the scarecrow/crow metaphor, I absolutely thought was genius! Kudos hun, kudos!"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

""Even your shadow sobbed" Wow Blake... amazing line there! You have a soul that is beyond age 17. You amaze me more with every piece. *bravo* sweetie! Well done!! I'm totally impressed. Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

"damn.. this almost made me cry.. you have such a way with words.. but i don't want you to die! you're to good of a friend to me! and i can see a lot of people like the way you write.. b/c it was really good.. well, ttyl"
Posted by mywristshurt on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"Damn, this was good, i felt it looming in the corner of my eye, and then it came.. "
Posted by Tonights Decision on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"You buried me above ground ....sweet line...actually, I just love the whole thing"
Posted by monalisamarie on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"so i covered my own ears and dove into a pool of mistakes... Magic said it best (damn him) :)"
Posted by Unknown on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"this was just heart stopping. "I keep killing myself but I wake up here everytime"....sometimes there's no escaping yourself."
Posted by dying angel on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"Oh wow, I think I almost stopped breathing for a moment. I think I just found a new love."
Posted by Army Barbie on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"You have a great skill, the words, and the way they are placed was amazing, great write"
Posted by Unknown on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"Good grief Blake. I felt as if I were being held down and not let up! You really are a talent to be reckoned with dear. This was brutal, yet amazing! *hugs* Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"you're talented.Nuff said."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"By the way, I'm in love with your titles. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

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