Comments by All Members
- "well. a huge "Welcome back" should preceed your posting after long absence, as you eluded below. As other commenters have bestowed, the compliments just flow, much like the inner cog of this nicely abstract poem; spacey and introspective with a good dose of observational merit. It reminded me of AniDayz, in the sense that there's a familiarity to rhythm, to the basic mechanical workings of homophonic sounds, but yet the whole structure of the piece was fresh and originally put together; the use of scattered syntax and punctuation ofr instance gave it a half-concrete poem effect, making the visual side just as appetising as the intellectual one. Guh, that sounds very 'academic' - not my intention; just...this: excellence..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Hieroglyphics in the east gateway: sleep" by slow.burn.star
- "This set my mind ablaze. Imagery to die for, as always. A serious trip for the heart and soul. After this, I need a fucking cigarette. God damn, Sigi, you're immaculate. Your poetry moves me in ways lovemaking can... and that's the best comment I could ever give anyone. Gorgeous. Distinct. Seductive. Make love to my mind. Over and over and over. *heartclick*"
Posted by Unknown on "Hieroglyphics in the east gateway: sleep" by slow.burn.star
- "This is a fantastic piece, you have such a unique way of thought and words. "the memories of you are clouded.
like time i never spent
and lips i never lingered upon". Just fantastic! "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "a contained and morbidly beautiful dreampiece. It's nice having you posting again, you're brilliant at it and I hope you never stop. RW."
Posted by Guillotine on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "the last few lines are kiler. i'm very happy i stumbled upon this one. so many great lines. "muted, chartreuse.
tiptoeing down my spine and across my cheek
like frail yellowed lace".....so amazing."
Posted by dying angel on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "She finally climbs out of the little box thats been sitting in the corner. I have reason to believe your writing skills are impressified. Face it, you're married to poetry, everytime you come back here to post, you leave a smell behind.. like a coin smell"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "I don't know how I missed this. Seriously, your works epitomise the feeling I get when I fall asleep and dream of something unexplainable and beautiful. You give enticing glimpses of something grand. "
Posted by nur hidayah on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- "I have been waiting for slow.burn.star to post another work and here she is in all her glory. "hours beating at the windowpane like bird wings" Mm wow. I love the disquiet, the glimpses of eerie strangeness, the beauty."
Posted by nur hidayah on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "Mesmerizing and engaging as with all your other works.. you have a special magic, a special touch that is yours alone.. beautiful."
Posted by Lynaes on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
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