Comments by All Members
- "Very haunting and well done - I especially loved the lines "so perfect in your sleep..
weeping tears like
shattered glass against the pale of your cheek.
you dreamed for me.
as the waves licked the sand and somewhere". Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "vintageviolence" by slow.burn.star
- "oh my god...SPOOKY! I can't beleive it! Everyone went changing their names and its taken me this long to find everyone again. Love this, as always- your back on my favs; rightfully so."
Posted by Chameleon on "vintageviolence" by slow.burn.star
- "Well, la de fucking da! Star girl, this is one maglificant piece. You make me twiddle in my jimmies. Super duper cool write."
Posted by Six-Out on "vintageviolence" by slow.burn.star
- "blanket quilted in mud fragments... softer then nibbles of your creation wandering further then your unconscious gathering~ TripLX"
Posted by Unknown on "UndeRsight_____" by slow.burn.star
- "nice = this poem was rotten good = i mean [] these words seem like they'ed be exactly adjacent to your thoughts themselves ...[if not, they're very damned close, yup] Thats what makes you a great writtorer: Thorpen' noodle soup; [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "The Queen of Bones:." by slow.burn.star
- "'Godamnit'GODAMNIT .you:*&^%$#@:!!! Pull the earth over my head and beat me to death with your words' :::sigh::: so beautiful ... so...... le pulchritudinous: Love Love [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on ".fogged.up.eyes." by slow.burn.star
- "Wow, that is so beautiful. I heard of you from someone, but I can;t remember who. Well, they told me my style merinds them of you. You're so much better. Thanks. *kitten*"
Posted by Amanda Parnell on ".fogged.up.eyes." by slow.burn.star
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