Comments by All Members
- "I would have posted sooner, but life has been hectic and I have been different. Selling my paintings for far too little, and putting far too much into them. good to hear you again."
Posted by edenscancer on "Creature feature" by edenscancer
- "''sometimes the words flow and i don't know where to put them'', that was very realistic and easily relatable. i sensed the torment in this, and for a small moment, i kind of felt it. what you were portrsying here. write on.
mari"
Posted by Mari on "5am" by edenscancer
- "the two last lines almost made me cry. i love this. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Lover" by edenscancer
- "so that means. i'm touched? or something gay like that. but i CAN'T get ths out of my mind. and i should know. i've been trying for months."
Posted by Mari on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "fucking. and here i am again. whatever you want to call it, this this has a huge impact on me. and right now it's the only thing i'm thinking about. i remember this and think of it sometimes even tho i read this a long time ago."
Posted by Mari on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "Oh my goodness-- That was a bit explicit. ^_^ Very nice, though. My favourite was the final stanza."
Posted by Lolita on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "Ahhhh, the whole first stanza is my favourite. The imagery is just wow. Well done, buddy. ^_^"
Posted by Lolita on "my name" by edenscancer
- "quite the life you've had! i'm glad you made it or i wouldn't have the intense pleasure of reading your work."
Posted by Unknown on "voyeur" by edenscancer
- "I felt as though I was swallowed by the abyss...fell of the ledge like the lemming metaphor....tremendous deep profound exercise in poetry dark and questing and maybe without answer....simply brilliant"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "voyeur" by edenscancer
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