Comments by All Members
- "you really have a way with the dark side of things...bringing it so vividly to lfe in such short, powerful pieces...well done."
Posted by natalie on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
- "textured and swimming with vision. your words are as colorful and melodious as always. i missed you and your voice. please stay for a while this time."
Posted by Unknown on "Eternal Song" by Equinox Asylum
- "simultaneously, I get excited and disappointed when you post a poem online - excited to read something new; something fresh - and feel the essence of your poetry, the words of you coming through....and disappointed because, you're so elusive a character; so non-prolific a poster; I never know if this is the start of something or just a cameo appearance....one min you're here; next you're confined to the shadows. And it's because I enjoy your writing; your poetry that I feel conflicted this way....almost angry, like I want to selfishly shake you and yell "WRITE WRITE AND SHARE SHARE....YOU BASTARD!!!" Hah - but I'm too polite to do this! :P Besides...you're about 10 ft taller than me...I wouldn't want to antagonise you too much!! But on a slightly more serious note....it's a treat to read something 'new' (is it even new...?!), or at the very least, new to me......and so for that I thank you....there was a kind of spacey feel to this; a philosophically drawn take on life and your subjectivity of thought over that time-plain; you master melancholy well and give it deep yet creative resonance.....if only we'd had you for a bit longer; the best ones are always the furthest away it would seem......be well man; message me if you're going to be around ......even if it's for a bit! Best wishes...Col :D"
Posted by stryder on "Eternal Song" by Equinox Asylum
- "it could...happen; I have heard from the big bad Baron...he may...return (again!!) . Fingers are oh so crossed..."
Posted by stryder on "Hover" by Equinox Asylum
- "“Found guilty of stagnation” what I found more chilling…
I sense a detachment, and yet there is something more that I can‘t quite get the words right to describe…
I enjoyed this very much…
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Posted by unspeakable truth on "Days Pass As Judgement" by Equinox Asylum
- "tremendous! Exalted poetics, I adored the manner of which ther narration was thread. The best of the current 3 you've posted recently. Great to see your poetry still contains that unique and beguiling surreality that I look for in works of this nature..a superb otherwordly representation; the imagination spinning and seared with the heat of the language and the coldness of the theme...I loved it, it took me where I wanted to be, in the dark hollow crevices of your imagination painted black.....awesome by definition"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Bewildered" by Equinox Asylum
- "I enjoyed this more than the Judgement poem, the inerralations between the rhythmic movements pulsate and throb with intensity and originality; no mean feat where rhyme is concerned; the words poise like Thor's hammer, ready to strike the killer blow, without actual elucidation, so there's a little bit of mystery to it. A brilliant slice of darkness with a pounding pulse. If only more could handle the darkness and give it this form. Excellent poem.."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Venus Sorrow" by Equinox Asylum
- "great to see you post again - you haven't lost that haunted edge, although I will admit at times it felt more like a collection of jumbled thoughts and wasn't always smooth to read. I did however enjoy the unique feel of lines like: "I am the prisoner of space where there is none", gave a very chilling, ghostly feel...an almost hollow; abstract rendering of the narrator's disposition, I felt. I also like the baalnce between imagination, mythical references such as Thor and the introspective stance. It's a shame your poetry is shared so sporadically and you disappear for such lengthy periods...I have the feeling most of your audience that liked sharing in your works has gone, and you might find true interest pretty fleeting. Hope I'm wrong, once again it's a pleasure to trip inside your mind, thanx for sharing big guy :D
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Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Days Pass As Judgement" by Equinox Asylum
- "THIS DOES NOT SUCK!!!! But you misspelt kaleidoscope you nugget! :P Anyhoots...this is a great surreal texture of words that I'm not sure of the whole outcome...would take more time and patience to dissolve"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Hypnotic Barbarism" by Equinox Asylum
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