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  • "sometimes, the past is too hard to let go, and i'm sorry for the pain that you've been though, but you write beautifully, a token of fresh air to remind the whithering soul, there is life......."
    Posted by beautifulfallenangel on "Unforgiven" by The Unforgiven Child
  • "i love it, especailly the first stanza. especially the first line. and i adore how you began the whole thing w/ the word 'and' like you're in the middle of a story. this is NOT the beginning. ~lauren~"
    Posted by xserratedsoulx on "Sickened" by The Unforgiven Child
  • "thats so amazing! im sorry for the pain that caused it but the beautie you have crafted from it...I look forward to future writes im glad you survived, your a sensation "
    Posted by weyvern on "Unforgiven" by The Unforgiven Child
  • "You have a lot of anger and pain and guilt. It bleeds from your work as does your passion to be dispassionate. You survived, do not waste a "miracle""
    Posted by Dei on "Unforgiven" by The Unforgiven Child
  • "welcome to dp. heartbreaking to know the source.. yet in this you've conveyed the anger frustration and loss perfectly... well done"
    Posted by NikesRain on "Unforgiven" by The Unforgiven Child
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