Sickened
By The Unforgiven Child
And the sky, it burns like fire,
the world, it comes apart,
you're up there now, just laughing,
because you stole my heart,
The skin, it doesn't seem the same,
it falls from bone like rain,
and rivers of blood flow down my face,
from your sickening refrain.
No more anger, no more tears,
and no more ever present fear,
You were here, now gone away,
and now's the time for child's play.
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© 2006 The Unforgiven Child
Published on Thursday, January 26, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, November 21, 2012, Killerdemonchick
(53) wrote:
great write
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On Sunday, January 14, 2007, beautifulfallenangel
(62) wrote:
shivers ran...but i like this write, beautifully and amazingly written, " and now it's time for child's play" was a wonderful ending, to this engulfing flame
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, Savannah
(218) wrote:
Wonderfully written. Very.. chilling.
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On Thursday, July 27, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
i love it, especailly the first stanza. especially the first line. and i adore how you began the whole thing w/ the word 'and' like you're in the middle of a story. this is NOT the beginning. ~lauren~
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On Monday, May 29, 2006, weyvern
(80) wrote:
aww nice! straight to the point but still poetic love it !
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On Friday, April 7, 2006, AnarKoRn
(15) wrote:
This is wonderful
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A former member wrote:
oo i like this...great write
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On Thursday, January 26, 2006, DarkNTormented
(11) wrote:
im the first to say welcome unforgivin one...for off the top of your head in less than 5 min props good work!!