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- "to tell you,atleast if the HIGH LORDS charge me with plagia...chuva(not good with spellings)i'll plead guilty but with consent....deal?"
Posted by Unknown on "Crickets" by johntaiyu
- "And you have both in aces.... You paint with words with a master's hand. Feelings becomes tangibles. I read your poems from "They dont sit still so good to crickets" Don't have to elaborate. O bdway, Your IN ZEN, is thumbtuck on my message board.just want"
Posted by Unknown on "Crickets" by johntaiyu
- "the sensation of the crickets own harmony and the delicate pace of the poem, amost hymonody like, I really liked this post, terrific post, well done, more thought and originality went into it...fantastic!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Crickets" by johntaiyu
- "John, I sigh. You made me long for the sound of crickets! I know I'm not the best at conveying in big words, or giving more than "that was beautiful", but it was and so are you! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Crickets" by johntaiyu
- "Yep, you're there before you know it, the blind, crazed side of humanity.. when you fall, you fall hard and fast.. can't really stop it because as you say, they are both pissed. Your insights on these aspects of life always hit the mark."
Posted by Unknown on "Meatball" by johntaiyu
- "could easily be that meatball, many times stumbled, fallen. You name it. This mini-vignette reads like midnight blues and skid row alcoholics sketchy lives. The slammer of bars locked up inside ourselves. Poignant write."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Meatball" by johntaiyu
- "love the portrayal on the generational gap, perhaps what was sacred is now lost.. and what is in its place is truly ugly, it all changed without a notice, or maybe there was and we just didn't catch the warning signs."
Posted by Unknown on "Granite Creek" by johntaiyu
- "the cold truth indeed, why are we so afraid to feel, I don't know, it screws with our sensibilities? people just want to keep moving to their schedules and not be distracted by trivialities of human interaction.."
Posted by Unknown on "Hearts Sedated" by johntaiyu
- "John, is it? You're amazing. I may be young and one of those crazy people you talk about...but in my sleepy town I relate more to what is remembered in this piece than what is. Man am I gonna miss it."
Posted by Army Barbie on "Granite Creek" by johntaiyu
- "so true, my addiction is not the same demon, but your words still ring true--that demon still lives and after 12 years of fighting it, 6 years winning, then falling, and now 3 months back on track..i agree ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "The Karma of Sobriety" by johntaiyu
- "Omg! See there, no hidden words, straight bluntness onto the screen. I related to this one so much. Whne I quit smoking 2 yrs. ago, it was hard, this reminds me why. *BRAVO* Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "The Karma of Sobriety" by johntaiyu
- "this oddly enough reminded me of Bukowski who I was reading last night, you say it plainly and directly with enough force of feeling to grab attention..and yes so true. "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Karma of Sobriety" by johntaiyu
- "I like this alot, I've never read your work but now that I have I see that you have a lot of talent."
Posted by Exodus on "Koan" by johntaiyu
- "very incisive in its appraisal over past events placing some semblance of order and wistful conclusion from it all."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Koan" by johntaiyu
- "wow... amazing introspective trip, you draw realism into everything so well, like a first or second nature, maybe it is gift, or lived through, certainly adds characteristics to your portraits."
Posted by Unknown on "Koan" by johntaiyu
- "This is really the power of experience and having seen something on a different side of life, so very moving, yet cold and matter-of-fact, like business as usual; the world doesn't stop for anything."
Posted by Unknown on "A Really Bad Joke" by johntaiyu
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