Comments by All Members
- ""sweet sorrow as the swanspath"...gawds. . .enough.enough painful breaking beauty for one morning. . .. miss your words indeed. . . this was simply an echo of classical yearning and broken.ness. . . made me warm and mute and shaking and completely unfolded. .. . in the harrowing imensity of such a small little thing.
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Posted by Unknown on "Martyr's Prayer" by Guillotine
- "Wow, unbelievable word usage and combinations...:) I LOVED "soft-light suicide" and "slake my throat in red sparrows" truly a piece of art. well done! :)Snake"
Posted by snakeskingrin on "Midnight Garden" by Guillotine
- "i love the rolls of the tongue, the rhythms and unreasoning and rhymes internal in this; and the keats ending was lickingly loverly.. .. . welldone indeed. ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Cocaine and Hypnosis" by Guillotine
- "" and full throttle for nothing but a whispered word"....... i can relate...and in my own experiences understand a lot with this piece. Truely a defining moment in your head."
Posted by Unknown on "Cocaine and Hypnosis" by Guillotine
- "Definitely found this to be worth the time it took to read it. You're onto something here and I think you managed more than fine. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
-SP"
Posted by Unknown on "Freefall" by Guillotine
- ""like a voyeur" indeed.. .i feel i am intruding on the most intimate of exchanges; thoughtfully provocative in all the smallest ways, the ways that make every nuance of body and soul cascade and tremble. ..rush....and leaves the reader slightly lightheaded and openmouthed. ..or at least it did me [esp the 4th and 5th strophes]...nothing should come per se between . ...en vibrato. ..~nessa"
Posted by Unknown on "Vanilla, Strawberries And Tchaikovsky" by Guillotine
- "A wonderful work, all the way through, but right in the middle, you brought me to tears. "I'll push you and regret it, I'll apologise
And you'll say its all okay.
I'll be pushed and say I'm sorry for being who I am.
This is a spiral. Did you know you can't swim upstream
In a black hole? That your body is wrenched, then scattered
Into a thousand thousand little molecules and cast about like dust?
A memory won't lie. " - stabbed perfectly through the core of my being, except I counter with this: mine do."
Posted by Sketso on "Breaking Down Is An Artform Perfected By Angels" by Guillotine
- "my favourite part...the "I." so isolated and separate. ... standing alone. what could hold more secrets than that? breathy write~
ness"
Posted by Unknown on "pu.lse" by Guillotine
- "Immaculate. This spoke volumes to me. This is why you're on my fucking favorites, Luke, and god damn you...*heartclick*"
Posted by Unknown on "Silence" by Guillotine
- ".....divinations of illuminated verse; the internal sounds of imbedded, imbued next to the external rhythms. .. something to recline in, bathe in--comparable to moonlight on skin. .. words that woo and smooth rough edges of life. . .egads; sublime stuff. ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Silence" by Guillotine
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