Comments by All Members
- "I liked this piece, very deep and personal. Making your pain so evident "Bruised, bent, broken,
These three I am." Each word leaving their mark upon my soul.."
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "No Lies" by Hello Dead Kitty
- "very passionate and provoking.."This eternity apart makes us useless to wait.
You take me as I welcome you in." i usually don't like erotic-type poems, but i really enjoyed this one. great write. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Stay, Don't Leave (erotica)" by Hello Dead Kitty
- "I like more erotic poems it has to be said being the old perv I am, so naturally I thought I'd have me some of this. Fleshed out with raw naked words, it left wanting to conclude the scenario myself - so wheres my candles..?
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Posted by Shadow Rapture on "You love me so right (erotica)" by Hello Dead Kitty
- "Oh... okay... now I feel dumb for missing that, but well now that you've given me this perspective... I am much more pleased... then again its not about pleasing me, but it should be... thats what matters."
Posted by darkdesires on "I Have What You Need So" by Hello Dead Kitty
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