You love me so right (erotica)

By Hello Dead Kitty

Passing by too closely
I almost gasped
My reaction at once
Who the fuck was that?
I swung around to see
Who could it be?
Brave enough to invade the space near me
Your smell so heavy, so musky, so sweet
Swelled in my senses so that I could barely breathe.
As your arm brushed against mine
I could feel a heat
Like no one before ever gave me
Curiosity grew
I had to know every inch of you
I moved so that my face came so close to yours
My lips barely met yours but your taste I had to have
Our eyes locked
We knew it was love
I grabbed your hand so tight
As whispers told you to follow me home.
We steadily moved
Until in sight my secret place we found.
As I fell backward I held onto you tight
I pulled you closer than a stranger should go
I closed my eyes as
My head began to swim
With your every touch
I desired you more
At once we were one together
Energy seemed to flow between you and me
I knew never again would I discover such ecstasy.
You moved in me, around me,
Your hardness said that you felt this too.
I knew we wouldn’t stop until the other we wholly discovered.
I screamed with you as we reached the point of no return
I knew then that I would keep you as mine
As no lover could bring me to the places
We found together, that night.

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© 2006 Hello Dead Kitty
Published on Friday, April 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • hoops On Sunday, March 1, 2020, hoops (10)By person wrote:

    l like this poem, i’m not sure why

  • A former member wrote: Very good, it just felt right , ya know.

  • elisa On Monday, April 17, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    i must agree.... rhythmic perfection......leaves me a bit.....flustered...*ponders*

  • Equinox Asylum On Monday, April 17, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    Wow! I need a cigarette. ;}

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