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  • "Im sorry..I had to laugh at the 'female machine' part..yes it was quite tender over all..I feel like you could have perhaps spread (excuse my bad pun!!) the end out a bit more..maybe a bit more descriptive without being crass..i dunno...three cheers for e"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "unexcused desire (erotica)" by Hello Dead Kitty
  • ""we tilted our hats to the same life saving grommet your soul was spilling from inside that familiar hatred i met on the slide you and i" very good write, and i loved the last two lines as well..very strong poetry. "
    Posted by Unknown on "lost in verse" by Hello Dead Kitty
  • "~smirks grasping her firmly~ this is one of the most accurate descriptions of life ~turns and leaves into the sunset with nothing but the marks from the firm grip to remember him by."
    Posted by Unknown on "welcome to my world" by Hello Dead Kitty
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