Comments by All Members
- "As I read this I couldn't help but see my own father in the words. As you say, not bad, just different. No truer words were ever spoken. I recently had a scare with my father concerning cancer, and this just reminded me to keep the relationship, different as it may be, going. Thank you, and be well."
Posted by MESUN on "The death of a king!" by LordBrosnian
- "I had logged out. Had to come back and tell you how much I enjoyed the poem. and now I have. great work, man."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Sweetbrier" by LordBrosnian
- "i too lust as you
tho desert it not be
for the source
of my lust
be wetter that the sea!"
Posted by lajeeves on "LUST" by LordBrosnian
- "thats whats up.. its kind of forbidden, but its so secretive you have to do something... oh yeah, oh yeah, thats shits good"
Posted by mywristshurt on "LUST" by LordBrosnian
- "well, why dont you write some more and put in there the way you want to die... just a suggestion... anyways, good write.. i like the fact that you used big words (unlike me) and that you tried keeping the reader on the edge"
Posted by mywristshurt on "A Tale of my destruction" by LordBrosnian
- "this was a beautiful poem.. it had intensity, but relaxation.. also, thank you for your comments.. they are greatly appreciated"
Posted by mywristshurt on "When it rains" by LordBrosnian
- "Despairingly wonderous and filled with magnificent lines...I especially adored the "does it hurt to die" stanza, which held its pace as the entire poem did with unmistakeable ease...brilliantly and flawlessly crafted"
Posted by Solace on "The death of a king!" by LordBrosnian
- "Beautifully rendered, I will breathe your air and exhale the same, teetering on those tall-tall branches, singing my little songs to those who dare to hear...magnificent"
Posted by Solace on "Brethren" by LordBrosnian
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