Comments by All Members
- "coly..this was powerful. you are lovely, dear. *hugs*"
Posted by Unknown on "remember" by coly
- "damn. that took me and threw me down making me watch every moment. such openness shows me how hidden i keep myself."
Posted by MESUN on "please let me forget" by coly
- "I understand your words...loving the man uou THINK you have..i am glad these feelings of mine are in the past..there are MUCH better guys out there. go get em'! *J*"
Posted by Jerrica on "love me" by coly
- "very very good, i know exactly what that feels like, except for the fact that i'm a guy, but yeah, i'm there right now"
Posted by Unknown on "love me" by coly
- "wow i loved the ryhme in this peice just amazing and you staid on point so good job on this one
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Posted by Unknown on "mirror" by coly
- "infection=bad. that's what people died from in the early 1800s because they didn't have penicillin ect. get it checked out. and monkey's right. get some sleep too. and a good meal. "
Posted by sIo on "help" by coly
- "oh thats so sad. My eyes are all teary. Depressingly well written write.."
Posted by JiNx on "remember" by coly
- "Nice ryhme scheme, this gave me memories of how I used to think years ago, excellent write ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "mirror" by coly
- "Its hard to find a sentence that places substance to what has happened in this write. All I know is that what you are is a hella of a lot more important then what you want yourself to be. Much respect Coly. Daniel "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "remember" by coly
- "'If hate can make you kill someone why cant love be stronger', great line. Has to be my favorite out of the whole writing. It's so true too!"
Posted by Unknown on "wich is stronger love or hate" by coly
- "You know at first I was displeased by the bunched up words because I have a short attention span, but this works for you I think and I enjoyed this piece. :) "
Posted by Err0r on "addicted" by coly
- "Wow, this get's very personal into your life and what you have done. Like you hold nothing back. I've almost been to the crazy house myself!"
Posted by Unknown on "please let me forget" by coly
- "Great writing, like S R said, sync or synch, but I like sink, the way it is. Makes you look more into it."
Posted by Unknown on "outta sink" by coly
- "Really great writing, I'm adding you to my favorite poets list! Just great stuff!"
Posted by Unknown on "addicted" by coly
- "Now that poem just took my heart and pulled it out. Wow, great writing, the feeling is felt by the time you reach the center of the second verse! Breath taking poem I'd say!"
Posted by Unknown on "remember" by coly
- "This one is great, like a few of mine too. With the "fuck you, fuck them, fuck me". I have also have a few cutting ones. Such a bad thing to do, yet one of my fav things to do. Great write!"
Posted by Unknown on "let me die" by coly
- "Very good, I like this one a lot! I have a fuck you one too, for one of my ex's."
Posted by Unknown on "fuck off" by coly
- "...There are 750 million things that I want to say to you...but there is nothing that I can say...nothing that will ease your pain...I'm sorry."
Posted by suicideseason on "remember" by coly
- "God...talk about having your feelings...all that you know..all that you care about...all placed into an industrial sized blender...on 'mutilate'...this is where I am right now..."
Posted by suicideseason on "remember" by coly
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