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mirror
By coly
looking in the mirror
looking at myself
looking at the reflection
of someone else
who is this person in the mirror
I cant tell if its me
her body is scared inside out
I see the blood pouring out
her eyes are feeled whith fear
her heart feeled whith tears
she fears she wont succeed
or truley ever find peace
I want to let her out I
want to set her free
because theirs a possibility
that the girl in the mirror is
ME
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© 2005 coly
Published on Sunday, October 30, 2005.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
i loved it. description and rhythm were outstanding...write on.....
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A former member wrote:
damn we have so much in commen its like we are each other just leaveing diff lifes
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A former member wrote:
wow i loved the ryhme in this peice just amazing and you staid on point so good job on this one
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On Friday, November 25, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171)
wrote:
Nice ryhme scheme, this gave me memories of how I used to think years ago, excellent write ~Josh~
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On Friday, November 18, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
i feel the same way at times, looking myselk in the mirror and wonder who is that on the other side
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A former member wrote:
wow nice end chic my
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A former member wrote:
this one is my absolute fave, i can really relate... *~`void`~*
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