please let me forget

By coly

I wish I never would have met him
I wish his lips would never have brushed mine
I fell in love with him and he threw me away
black eyes and bruises are what I got for loveing him
along with a trip to the crazy house for trying to killmy self
25 pills is what I devowred
and subsquently im still alive
I wish that I would fall into a comma
wake up without a memory
or i'll never be free of my love
and though this is how I feel
I still wish I could be with him
hes my srenght my condfidont
and also my best freind

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© 2005 coly
Published on Wednesday, November 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: its fucking good but i think you might want to know there is a spelling error STRENGTH srenght my condfidont and also my best freind

  • MESUN On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    damn. that took me and threw me down making me watch every moment. such openness shows me how hidden i keep myself.

  • A former member wrote: Wow, this get's very personal into your life and what you have done. Like you hold nothing back. I've almost been to the crazy house myself!

  • A former member wrote: doesn't sound like a best friend to me, babe, but i understand. no offense or anything, but spell check... :) much love.

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