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"You got that right, without question. To quote Bill Hicks: â€œhumans are just a virus with shoesâ€. More so now than ever. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Ambiviphant" by Lady Grinning Soul

"oh, how i've missed you"
Posted by Cassette on "It's Raining" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Most humans don't see the big picture nor the small things like we do... I like your style ... if the title is a creative morphing of ambivalent and the Latin root meaning to show , then that's pretty cool too"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Ambiviphant" by Lady Grinning Soul

""and when it does I want to vanish with the rain." This snapped the whole piece back into such sharp focus and brought everything to its perfect conclusion. Excellent work."
Posted by carlosjackal on "It's Raining" by Lady Grinning Soul

"this was very powerful...love it! -Xie Xie -HM"
Posted by Unknown on "Ambiviphant" by Lady Grinning Soul

"and history...repeats...itself... Well illustrated. Thanx for sharing :-)"
Posted by Void Vortex on "Ambiviphant" by Lady Grinning Soul

"You are wise beyond your years, and I don't even know how old you are. This was a great piece. "
Posted by Unknown on "Ambiviphant" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Damn. This was amazingly good! - BFP "
Posted by Bornfrompain on "Ambiviphant" by Lady Grinning Soul

"we're paving a path straight to hell, that's for sure."
Posted by Patches on "Ambiviphant" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Wow...wow!!! This is amazing. I'm sitting here reading it and nodding my head because I too am infected. I've always said insanity is an infection. Reminded me of some of my works. This is way better. ðŸ’š"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Infected" by Lady Grinning Soul

"I applaud this work as the truth bursts through these words. Very inspiring, and thought provoking. Nice write"
Posted by Divine hell on "Leading Sheep to Slaughter" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Wow. Chills! Amazing and awesome structure.ðŸ’š"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Leading Sheep to Slaughter" by Lady Grinning Soul

"nicely assembled on the page...I feel as though the air I am breathing is luring me toward the conveyor belt of assimilation toward the slaughter....thank you for this great poem!"
Posted by Unknown on "Leading Sheep to Slaughter" by Lady Grinning Soul

" If this is a parallel between life & the infamous biblical verse, then you captured it well from the beginning to the end ... loved the form, and play on words ... ;) "
Posted by Devil lyn on "Leading Sheep to Slaughter" by Lady Grinning Soul

"I really like that this poem carries a sad mood, yet directs the reader that the sadness is from within not from lost love but from sorrow, regret, and duty...I get burned out on love poems. and this reads like a looking out at a distant sadness...well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Distant Shores" by Lady Grinning Soul

"I love it. Visual poems are my favorite. Very well crafted. TY"
Posted by Just Dave on "I Lose Myself Between Satin Sheets" by Lady Grinning Soul

""And Iâ€™ve left my glass slippers At home So that my heart (as broken as it already is) Doesnâ€™t break even further When you find out that Iâ€™m not your Cinderella." - those are great lines. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul

"I have never used this term before and will never use it again. I have died inside every time I have heard it used. But offer one more breath to hear it used again.. OMG. omigod. ... shit....I saw the title ... was gonna make a fart joke... it made one for me with the foul gas and all that.. then it felt like a response to a conversation I've only had with myself. like finding a song that fits the mood. I am glad I found this today. "
Posted by RepulsiveAttraction on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul

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