Comments by All Members
- "this is heart breaking. you have broken my heart...sew it up again please? :) this is a beautiful write. you have matured alot in your writting. you are more blunt and strait forth with your true feelings and im loving it"
Posted by spaniellie on "Creativity?" by Saschwann
- "one of my faves i think. it explained yourself perfectly. iam in awe!!! please remember that it is HEATHLY to talk about things, and that despite you writing only for an outlet your beautiful writting should not gather dust..."
Posted by spaniellie on "A Letter to Me" by Saschwann
- "Saschwann, the title inspired me to read this poem of yours first, but it me somewhat-sad. :( But good one!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "My Happy Mask" by Saschwann
- "Short simple and to the point. I feel the beat sittin here in my seat and just cant help but tap my feet "
Posted by Unknown on "Contradictions" by Saschwann
- "Oh my god. this is going on my favourites. everytime i read it it makes me cry."
Posted by Unknown on "Break Me" by Saschwann
- "Ya know...I kinda liked how short and simple this was. Odd...extremely. But still...I think I like it..."
Posted by Army Barbie on "Wings" by Saschwann
- "Very cool. It's an awesome concept, but I think it might be stronger if you didn't connect the mask to yourself at the end. Trust us to realize it's a metaphor. Still, impressive and clever."
Posted by Liz on "My Happy Mask" by Saschwann
- "it's like that poem My Paintbrush (if you don't know it go to Err0r's profile) except here, you can't cover things up again."
Posted by MESUN on "My Happy Mask" by Saschwann
- "You feel the end of the poem coming, but your choice of words is gorgeous! Sad sad story though"
Posted by Linwe on "My Happy Mask" by Saschwann
- "awww man, you never cease to amaze me my friend. these poems are about to explode from the sorrow that is put in them. you deliver your emotions so well when your trying to hide them. :P i love you."
Posted by spaniellie on "A Couple More Poems" by Saschwann
- "These were people in the poetry class I taught last year. They are also very close to me. One of them asked me to post these poems. So here they are.
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Posted by Saschwann on "A Collection of Clerihews" by Saschwann
- "i love the first one a helluva lot.
it is me!!!
i was the turky all along
it was me!
hehehe
i am the insain fairy girl.
"
Posted by Unknown on "A Couple More Poems" by Saschwann
- "oh honey! im here for you. you should know that your darkness contains more beauty then christs light. "
Posted by spaniellie on "Me (I guess)" by Saschwann
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