Comments by All Members
- "We all taste the rain and I'd love to share an umbrella with you some time. Meanwhile, I'm reading you...and thanking you for sharing your words. "
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "Take My Hand" by RubyXero
- "I find myself looking back often to times better than now. I think things only get harder because we have more on our plates to deal with as we get older. As for those joyous things I feel they aren't dragged away, but they merely fade from our presence. The best we can hope for is to create little happy moments to battle the overwhelming grief that is life. In then end, oh well, keep rolling."
Posted by MESUN on "Take My Hand" by RubyXero
- "thank you. i know. i had sooo much fun with it that night. i released the evil beast inside me ;)"
Posted by RubyXero on "Wayward Child" by RubyXero
- "Ah, it's always in vain. Lovely write, i was captivated from start to finish. And I'm happy to read on your main page you got your first whip. They're exciting."
Posted by wilted on "Wayward Child" by RubyXero
- "This leaves me feeling a sort of hope, as tacky as that sounds. But it was very emotion and thought evoking, nice work."
Posted by wilted on "Everlasting" by RubyXero
- "Very tough life...how unfortunately common is non acceptance...I felt this one..different gender..different life...same issues...maybe someday they will understand...great write..I hope they can come around ;}=
Bloth"
Posted by SGT Bloth on "Wayward Child" by RubyXero
- "well you sure are going through a field of razor-wire aren't you? i believe you are fully capable of handling all this in the long run. be strong, plan things knowing your own actions and abilities are what's for certain. do that, and vain questions or not, you'll be fine. "
Posted by MESUN on "Wayward Child" by RubyXero
- "Yes, you ask in vain. God, I love this poem! You are awesome! I've been there and done that also. Come to terms with it, or it will eat you alive."
Posted by Unknown on "Wayward Child" by RubyXero
- "This really pulled at my heartstrings and my favorite line "I'm going
through film like candy." was so selfless, so beautiful, that I have to believe the person who wrote it deserves more than I can ever extol.
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Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "Wayward Child" by RubyXero
- "As strong as the subject and the words are its still the even stronger rhyme that drew me in. I love poems for the sound of poetry so I'm glad you weren't scared into free verse just because you had a message to bring :)"
Posted by Unknown on "A Lone Night" by RubyXero
- "if this is about what I think it's about...it's fucked up and wrong, that anyone would do that because of age. That's all..."
Posted by Unknown on "Embrace to Heartache" by RubyXero
- "fucking a. i loved the line "tales and warnings flee the lips and crawl into the ears" i just that the was fucking great. as i read on i felt you were talking about a vulture. the feeling of being in the desert and the buzzards circling over head and a soon to come death was what i got from this piece. excellent stuff. carry on."
Posted by MESUN on "Silent Stalker" by RubyXero
- "I like the how it reads, though I find it appears limited to a single culture(though a not entirely wrong generalization). I see the attempt with the Indian reference/dimensions crossed. I think it would be interesting if you illustrated how it transcends into many cultures. Does kind of have a tone of the Old West perspective...then goes mod.(*thinks Sam Elliot Character, then shopping mall, goes to get coffee, and hopes does not come across harsh)"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Silent Stalker" by RubyXero
- "I'd slap the one who said 'time heals' because it doesn't, we all know that and this is a solid proof.I feel your sorrow, nicely written. "
Posted by palenoble on "Embrace to Heartache" by RubyXero
- "a lot of stuff going on here. i feel kinda of pointless cause i don't really know what to say. don't forget our struggles are there to make us stronger."
Posted by MESUN on "Embrace to Heartache" by RubyXero
- "The last part reminds me of an old love that I lost long ago but it was like yesterday and it still hurts. It always does..."
Posted by Narcissa on "Embrace to Heartache" by RubyXero
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