Comments by All Members
- "Could've done without the lyrical scheme and repeation of the title and subsequent line. But I enjoyed the feeling and forced flow of this piece."
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Can't You See?" by thornyrose
- "I read this and get flashes of memories long since forgotten. It's nice, sometimes, to be reminded of harder times. Lovely choice of words, they flow nicely."
Posted by wilted on "razors edge" by thornyrose
- "call to arms couldn't have put it better. That's all that is. Slavery in the form of freedom."
Posted by Unknown on "razors edge" by thornyrose
- "crushing, we must pick up the peices adn glue them together ourselves....this world sucks~*dani*~ good write"
Posted by GraveFlower on "Pieces" by thornyrose
- "How long will the search continue? Something I think we all have asked ourselves at one point in our lives."
Posted by Mahakala on "Tear" by thornyrose
- "i know how you feel when the dark starts to creep inside you. it's hard to turn away sometimes. you painted a very accurate picture with your words. "
Posted by Unknown on "Creeping Darkness" by thornyrose
- "simplistic but the words throbbed with their own purpose...I enjoyed because it didn't embellish or exaggerate just gripped for a few seconds that feel of dislodged abandon....nice work "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Creeping Darkness" by thornyrose
- "It is so good to see you post after so much silence."
Posted by Thorn on "You" by thornyrose
- "Wow i really liked this it read really good, and had a nice tone to it, the ending fitting perfectly ~Pure1~"
Posted by Unknown on "Lovers Embrace" by thornyrose
- "The closing of this hits very hard indeed; you've perfectly expressed that emotion here. Deeply poignant, touching write that is sadly too familiar. Lovely.
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Posted by monalisamarie on "embraced" by thornyrose
- "This is amazing. honestly one of the best poems I've ever read. It has so much emotion, it's so powerful... I love it."
Posted by Thorn on "~Alone~" by thornyrose
- "*Falls over clutching her empty chest* You may not know your heart is still there, but you should know that you now own mine. This is so depressinly deadly...and yet so brilliantly beautiful...it's wonderful. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "~Alone~" by thornyrose
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