Tear

By thornyrose

A raw and exposed soul
with eyes so vast and empty
the pain and sadness within to be seen
searching for comfort
the light that once shown bright in them
begins to die out
while silent tears fall
as she looks for something
she will never find.

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© 2007 thornyrose
Published on Monday, March 19, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mahakala On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    How long will the search continue? Something I think we all have asked ourselves at one point in our lives.

  • BeautifullyRuined On Monday, March 19, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (93)By person wrote:

    This is so sad but i like it.

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