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"This is a rather powerful declaration of your freedom and individuality. Very well written."
Posted by Choronzon on "It's More Than Just a Hole in My Body" by wannabe_rebel

"it's a great feeling when the hurt you feel is your own doing, but don't do the "to the bone" bit. i'd miss ya!"
Posted by serotonin lost on "It's More Than Just a Hole in My Body" by wannabe_rebel

"this poem is all so perfect. you conveyed this horror with the utmost eloquence. great job with this. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "An Afternoon to Change a Lifetime" by wannabe_rebel

"some of the rhymes sounded forced, but despite that, this poem is so honost and truethful. i love the raw emotion. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "Like Everyone Else" by wannabe_rebel

"i too have an attachment to piercings that is more than just the initial desire to adorn your body. great job with this. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "It's More Than Just a Hole in My Body" by wannabe_rebel

"congratulations .. you are the proud new owner of ,, you ... good stuff .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "It's More Than Just a Hole in My Body" by wannabe_rebel

"oddly inspirational .. statement states ,,,, transfer of ownership .. i only hope that the symbol youre left with will be enough ... make it enough ... "
Posted by capt_funguy on "It's More Than Just a Hole in My Body" by wannabe_rebel

"I like your style. -Gidoen"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Faking It" by wannabe_rebel

"You describe yourself as defiled in many lines here. But the picture you paint is beautiful. The images are painfully peaceful. -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "So This Is What We've Become" by wannabe_rebel

""The grinding gets louder, My bones are only powder." Great line. I picture someone angrily grinding their teeth down til their whole head is gone. Bravo! -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Like Everyone Else" by wannabe_rebel

"but phant nailed it best , you're a quiet "hidden gem" on this site ... beutiful truths ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel

"the " drowned girl" made the blue vivid with a little startle .. the others mentioned " flow " .. i agree completely ... but more than that , it has dimension ,"
Posted by capt_funguy on "The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel

"ahh.. horrible i can imagine.... :S... perfectly portrayed though"
Posted by yslehc on "An Afternoon to Change a Lifetime" by wannabe_rebel

"due to the subject matter , yet it is .... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "An Afternoon to Change a Lifetime" by wannabe_rebel

"unfortunately , this is all too common a topic .. sorry for that , but this is a very strong piece .. the second verse especially , was exceptional .. i hesitate to get all .."great write!!!" ..."
Posted by capt_funguy on "An Afternoon to Change a Lifetime" by wannabe_rebel

"oh man ... this was rough ... pretty obvious where you stand ... this was cutting , and clear .... very well done ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Jaime (part II)" by wannabe_rebel

"This flows so nicely good work"
Posted by Unknown on "The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel

"this was passionate and delicious. great write. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "I Was Only Ever Strangled By the Rest of Them" by wannabe_rebel

"everytime I read another one of your works I'm more amazed than before.I agree with Melvin, DAMN..."
Posted by abattoir on "The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel

"wow....this piece was amazing.words used were colorful.WELL DONE"
Posted by abattoir on "Jaime (part II)" by wannabe_rebel

"very nice...I like the picture you painted with your words...my favorite, "Because teenage love never warms us,never warns us""
Posted by abattoir on "Faking It" by wannabe_rebel

"i love how this flows...subdued for such a tumultuous moment."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel

"very nicely written, this; fine construction and just really very impressive all around. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel

"I'm going to have to agree with perr here "
Posted by Unknown on "A Thirteen Year Old Dream" by wannabe_rebel

"that's hot.....in a sick and twisted sort of way"
Posted by Unknown on "Girl (part I)" by wannabe_rebel

""Teenage love just smokes here and burns us " beautiful line I can really see truth in it ( though I havn't been a teenager in a while "
Posted by Unknown on "Faking It" by wannabe_rebel

"everyone needs a place like this"
Posted by Unknown on "Pulled" by wannabe_rebel

"damn....."
Posted by Unknown on "The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel

"this reminds me of my youth.......thank you"
Posted by Unknown on "A Prayer" by wannabe_rebel

"loved the flow allso dug all the ajectives..... thought they where nice.....yeah"
Posted by Unknown on "Jaime (part II)" by wannabe_rebel

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