An Afternoon to Change a Lifetime

By wannabe_rebel

It’s too late
to erase
your hostile hands,

Hands, like insects
that went where they pleased,
Destroyed my foundations
and spread their disease,

Hands,
Like cigarette plumes
that penetrate my insides –
Smoke, like hands.
Lungs, like thighs.

If I had been older,
I might have been bolder,
and known how to tell you to
Stop.

But it’s too late
to erase
your hostile hands.

I can still feel them
Making their demands.


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Copyright 2005 Kristin Hubbard
Published on Friday, September 2, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this poem is all so perfect. you conveyed this horror with the utmost eloquence. great job with this. ....-samone

  • yslehc On Friday, September 2, 2005, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    ahh.. horrible i can imagine.... :S... perfectly portrayed though

  • capt_funguy On Friday, September 2, 2005, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    unfortunately , this is all too common a topic .. sorry for that , but this is a very strong piece .. the second verse especially , was exceptional .. i hesitate to get all .."great write!!!" ...

  • capt_funguy On Friday, September 2, 2005, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    due to the subject matter , yet it is .... funguy

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