Thunder Fix

By ArtemisticSin

Whipping crack ending in beautiful harmony of chaos, discord, and destruction
Fire raining down upon these bastard souls
Showing little mercy, the church bells, they do toll
For thine ignorant swine grace of your pitiful selves
Put them higher, making but lies they will kill
And can they promise misery?
No but though deliver
And can they show some decency?
No, you're left out to shiver
Cold nights spent, you should overthrow
These pompous ignorants who's respect just don't show
Cast down your weapon and strangle them by hand
Maybe through sheer force of will
They'll come to understand
Take the body cold, no mercy will you show
Desecrate this ugly thing
No honor for ungrateful dead
In this mold create, a thousand little minds
Bent on living right
The clock has kept its time
Sorrow lives on as those pigs as men do run
Never steal a glance as a war on pity shuns
Chase these wills, surely they will break
Finally a good world we can make



*I wrote this in a thunder storm
Here are a bunch more little bits of poetry


Two-tone lightning strike imprint on thine eyes
Fleeting swift as lightning bolting through a heavenly sky
We're all denied

Sting my eyes with heavenly light flashing out of sight
My beloved sing with me

As you wish for the crack of thunder to drown out the white noise on sorrowed ears full of misery

Let it crash, let it fall, let the heavens just fall down

Purple magic light my heart's delight
Let us feel so together right
Etch your wonders in my sight
On this oh so darkened night

Please let the rain fall upon my fevered brow, let the heavens cry for me

Power bestowed with crack and bolt that one might not match it

Tension bold, tension building
To hear the crack you do fear
This light and boom enthrall me so
Heaven's rains just let go

Dazzling outlines burn my eyes
To them I spawn my
Greatest lies
Best denies
Sorrowed goodbyes

Imprint, double-vision chill breeze through a statical night, feverishly writing

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© 2007 ArtemisticPyro
Published on Saturday, May 19, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    great write very well written

  • Aurora_Light On Sunday, May 20, 2007, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    very well written and very moving. the little bits were great too!

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, May 19, 2007, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    articulate.......nature imbued.........well done

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