Lovin it!

By Winter Born

It is not my fault
I love this part of my job
the wind rushing past
Pulling tears from my dark eyes
My crew rules the road!

flashes in the dark
lead and copper flies wild
pings and zings near me
bright red streaks reach out to me
Poor aim saves our lives

Had enough of this
The roar of my weapon fire
the kick against me
My rounds reach out to stop this
The night goes quiet...

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© 2007 deployed to hell
Published on Friday, March 30, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Saturday, October 7, 2017, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    very descriptive. Absolutely love it. JD

  • Sin Amor On Wednesday, July 6, 2011, Sin Amor (8)By person wrote:

    A warrior poet. There are too few of you these days.

  • Dilated View On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    The heat of the moment. I am positive without having actually been in that moment one would not be able to come close to relating but thanks for giving some perspective.

  • Army Barbie On Saturday, March 31, 2007, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    And you love the danger. Hooah. Hahahaha. Be safe.

  • A former member wrote: Interesting way of giving us all a perspective on what most of us will never know. Thank you for doing what you do. ~Ship!

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