senses

By Winter Born

Hear: moaning, gasping
See: blushing skin quivering
Smell: her arousal
Taste: our juices on her wet kiss
Feel: her tight wet grip

*These are Tanka poems. My speciality. A five line version of the Haiku. they are supposed to be this short.

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© 2007 deployed to hell
Published on Sunday, February 25, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: not really my thing, but cool nonetheless

  • Tania On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Tania (192)By person wrote:

    different. and different is good. great

  • ubiquitoussoul On Saturday, April 17, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    great is better.best.Here I nest in goodness..Sensually tanked..Thanks.

  • A former member wrote: this is great. I don't see too much Haiku or Tanka at DP(maybe I'm not looking hard enough)refreshing!

  • A former member wrote: Interesting. I'll have to try writing one sometime. Well done.

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