drive

By girlafraid

your words always held me
paper breaths and ink ejaculations
hot on my stomach
slip slide right into my core

there was always this place
fingertip fires
pressed lips
tongue tip promises kept
shadow thrusts
the girl I wanted to be

feel the plea on my skin
escaping every pore

your outline
against the window
was everything
is

show me that place
timeless
slow
image burn necessity
possibilities untouched
return and begin

lead
and you know
where I’ll be

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Published on Monday, February 5, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "drive"

A former member wrote: very passionate without being commercially vulgar... great work
On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

Great piece! I love the imagery in this one very much! Ciao, T/S
On Monday, August 6, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

This is incredible, every line was perfect.
On Monday, June 18, 2012, missanthropic (26) wrote:

*sigh* I love this piece it is so emotive in every way. Thank you for this!
On Monday, December 24, 2007, italianbella (183) wrote:

absolutely wonderful such longing and desire lol i wish I could feel as enraptured as you:)
On Saturday, August 11, 2007, Winterwords (3) wrote:

So easy to relate to - still holding my breath, because I fear to break the spell it has over me...
A former member wrote: this was wonderful...I must read more of your work
On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, flying_fox (571) wrote:

Raina Raina Raina... this was just slipslidey loveliness. Reading it brings a little smile to my lips. Oh happy happy happy days. Great to read you again. Hope to chat with you soon! xxx
On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

perfectly done.
On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

ripped me to shreds, im glad you have posted again. ps- love the floyd quote
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Lynaes (854) wrote:

Raina! You posted and I'm so very happy that you did.. this is just.. beautiful. The ending was like a promise of always being there, and that is a gift to cherish. You were always able to create strong emotions..
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Lynaes (854) wrote:

Post again Raina! Because I love your work, and so does DP.. and * is starting to think you don't fancy him anymore. Much love to you dear.
On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

who the hell is - " * " ?
On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, girlafraid (479) wrote:

* is everything and nothing. * cannot be explained by mortals. * began as a mistake in the chat box, i think. Kim and I liked to take the chat box over, * was our pal.
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

methinks we should just quit our jobs. you are the perfect one, thankyou for this, it's so beautiful ... we need to get away, like soon.
A former member wrote: "tongue tip promises kept" Goodness, you have a lovely way of stating things originally. And this piece...the longing for a moment to be relived...excellent! ~*Beth*~